Vigil

a poem

rough (emphasis on rough) draft of a poem for my creative writing class. if you have any suggestions or thoughts in regards to it PLEASE comment them! i am not a poet and i could use the help. (for one, i think i need to do something about the unintentional repetition of the third line and the last line as it might come off as contradictory.)

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All my life
I have known
I belong to the Night.

I am reaching—
Out—
Incessantly—
Breathlessly—
Devout.

i find myself…
at windows:
territories
of          warmth
                 and
                 chill;
oh so deceptively bound
from one another and yet…
i’ve stolen my fill.

Amongst settling dusk,
melodies
milky and sweet
     g     l     i     d     e
from shadowed ships above
enchant me
entangle me
towards
a boundless Be. 

All Mine. that is: i mean: at the least: i may 
                                                                  belong to 
myself.